Thursday, February 06, 2014

A new student review of Willow

dancechicka posted a new student review of Willow . See the full review.

This book was a disappointment for me, personally.  I feel like Hegamin can and has capitalized on the potential to become a great author before, but this book was a novice work of hers for sure.  Awkward sentences, underdeveloped characters, below-par vocabulary.  I felt like most of the book was exposition and building tension toward the climax, which turned out to be utterly predictable and rushed.  You knew within the first ten pages what was going to happen in the end—the other 350 pages were just pomp and circumstance, some parts completely irrelevant to the story.  And once the climax came, it was resolved in 5 pages or less—plotlines either tied off or severed within a sentence.  The characters were hard to connect with—I could barely stand Willow at all!  She seems self-centered and horribly wishy-washy and immature.  And her whirlwind romance with the elusive Cato—bah.  They fall in love within a couple of one-line sentences betwixt each other in a hidden journal, and when they finally meet, they are willing to give up anything to be with each other, no matter whose head they have to step on.  Revolting, really.   All in all, an unsatisfactory and dispassionate book that I felt could have been better.

“The man shook Cato’s hand; it took the rest of Cato’s strength before his vision was once again consumed with darkness.”

I would recommend this book for ages seven and up, as it is a clean read and only has a very mild expletive or two.  The vocab, as I said above, is very easy to understand, also.

When Cato begs Willow’s help and offers her freedom, she is faced with a choice—will she accept his offer, or stay rooted to her home in Knotwild, always wondering what could have been?  Tonya Cherie Hegamin has the answers in her new novel, Willow!

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