The story line is amazing, but the details are lacking. I could not picture the characters at all. I do not know what hair color Larry has or even his brother; furthermore, I don't have a clue about their height. I feel that well developed characters make a story come alive. With that, I gave it a 3. However, the story line is just great. This is the first book in a series as well.
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Monday, March 10, 2014
A new student review of Undead Heart
A new student review of Will in Scarlet
I really liked Will In Scarlet, although I didn’t like the few bad words it had. It was exciting, scary, and hopeful all in one. The author used interesting words to entice you to read this book. Will was a believable character for this genre, as were all the other characters. I would recommend this book to ages 12 and up.
Sunday, March 09, 2014
A new student review of Jade Dreams (Sacred Stones) by Wakefield Mahon
I liked the story of the book, but I feel like the character develpment was weak. Raven, the main antagonist, came out of nowhere. Her backstory was never explained and I think if her character was better developed the book would be much less confusing. I also wish the relationship between Becca and her parents was played out more. Last but not least, I think the ending was rushed. I had so many questions going through my mind and only a few of them were answered by the last few chapters and the epilogue. Despite the issues I mentioned, I do believe this book could be really good. The idea behind the storyline was great and I got a pretty good understanding of the main characters, but not enough to fall in love with the novel. I would really like to see these changes made and get another chance to read it because I do think it could be great.
A new student review of S'nat Wars by Linda Palmer
To me this book was good, but it was a little boring at times. At some times the writer just goes off into another world just to explain little things so thoroughly. But I liked how the bodyguard turned out to love the girl and turn it into something different. Just to think about being in a world with supernatural beings would be awesome and to be born with a heredity from your parents with a supernatural talents would be even cooler.
A new student review of A Really Awesome Mess
A Really Awesome Mess dealt with some pretty deep topics. Themes such as anorexia, bulimia, sexual activity, and depression were often brought up. The authors did an okay job with these sometimes difficult to navigate subjects; however, they could've done much better. For this reason, I'd advise people with triggers to tread lightly into this book. At times, the sheer frankness of one of the main characters (Emmy) made me cringe. Towards the end of the book, this problem ceased. But allow me to restate this; tread lightly into this book with the knowledge that the main character's have some potentially hurtful opinions.
Teenage love seemed as if it were supposed to be a big part of the book, but it didn't really come up all that much, and when it did, I became increasingly frustrated. This may be attributed to the fact that teenage love is an irritating topic in general to me, but it just seemed much more so in this book than any other. I knew that the authors wanted to get at a touching tale of two love-stricken, mentally screwed teens, but I feel that it should have been a bigger aspect to really accomplish that feat. This wasn't so. The opportunity seemed missed in my eyes---the main part of their 'love' that I noticed was how rushed it was.
Another angle of this book I did not like was the dialogue; it was sloppy and unrealistic. There seemed to be nothing normal said. Real people say mindless things and rant and talk about random things. Everything said by this book's characters was for the sole purpose of progressing the plot. Now, this is a personal opinion, just as every other part of this review is, so other people may not have a problem with this. It was just something I noticed and wanted to point out.
My last issue with this book was how unrealistic and cliche it was. The officials at Heartland were irresponsible and wishy-washy and completely unlike how it would be in real life. So many things slipped them by and many actions went without consequence. I was a bit shocked at how blatantly played down some things were.
Overall, this book was a miss for me. I was excited to read about these two teens and become attached to them as I normally do with characters, but it was near impossible for me to like this duo. I couldn't support them and hope for good for them---I tried and tried, I did. Basically, there were so many aspects of this book that could've been turned into something utterly phenomenal, but sadly, they were overlooked.
Ugh, this book is just oozing with potential.
A new student review of Formerly Shark Girl by Kelly Bingham
This book was okay. Like its predecessor, Formerly Shark Girl was told in poems and letters. There wasn't much conflict or plot, and many of Jane's actions were predictable. I felt that Formerly Shark Girl was written just to tie up loose ends from Shark Girl. Having read Shark Girl, I did want to find out what happened to Jane and other characters, so this book felt a lot like an extended ending. However, I don't think that this book was as emotionally compelling as Shark Girl. I understand why Jane was so torn between art and nursing. I also really liked that the reader got to see some of the letters written to Jane to understand the pressure she felt. I don't think this book was as emotional as Shark Girl. This is a relatively quick read, and I would recommend it to realistic fiction fans in sixth grade and up.
Thursday, March 06, 2014
A new student review of The Interrogation of Ashala Wolf by Ambelin Kwaymullina
Out of all the dystopian genre books I've read, I like this idea best. However, I struggled to get through it. When I started reading it, pushing through the first 20 pages was a challenge. I got confused with who was talking and when. The book begins with Ashala being detained. It was difficult for me to connect all the dots. I was completely lost for a majority of the book. Again, I like the idea and plot but I think it could have been written in a clearer way. However, the detail and descriptions really painted a picture in my head. The author also did a good job of describing emotion, which caused me to understand and almost feel the same emotion that the character was feeling.
Wednesday, March 05, 2014
A new student review of Every Day After by Laura Golden
If you feel down you should read this book. It is a very good book and it was a very good inspiration to me. There are a lot of tough situations in this book so it took a while to read and understand what Lizzie was going through. I loved how Lizzie found hope again and fixed her problems by facing her fears, even though this is the opposite of what her dad told her. I am glad I read this book and learned that there are different ways to trust people. This is a good book for ages 10 and up.
A new student review of Quests of Shadowind: Sky Shifter by LA Miller
In my opinon, it is a slow moving book at the beinging but gets better as you read on. But overall it is a good book. There is some mystery to it. I think it would be good for 5th and 6th graders and even some 7th graders.
A new student review of The Chance You Won't Return
I thought that The Chance You Won't Return was a really good book! There was a few swear words.