The story was pretty good, but used way too little description. The only things the author described were the gazebo and the character's personalities. What color was his hair? What about his eyes? Also, I hated the ending. What happened to Josh and Stella? Did they start dating? I felt that the title was misleading and there was way to much text-talk. On the positive side, there weren't many mistakes and it was a good story. It was easy to follow and had enough dialogue. So overall it was an entertaining story.